Friday, December 26, 2008

You Changed Me Twice Over


You changed me twice over….
Once with love, then with pain
My heart rose to ethereal heights…
It barely could trust again.

You changed me twice over…
I begged, cried, reconciled then.
lips cold, spirit confined…..
Contentment – I learnt to feign.

You changed me twice over….
From adoring, all-believing eyes,
And soul dipped in softness…..
To clenched fists and severed ties.

Scaling heights of passion….
Then numbness regained.
You changed me twice over….
There's no trace of pain.

8 comments:

  1. Amazing poem Jayeeta! Excellent!

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    1. Took a long time for me to reply, Saurabh...Thank you so much

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  2. encoutered this beautiful blog and perchanced to brush over afew of your write-ups. liked your thoughts. do keep posting.

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    1. Coming from you, Indra da, this is one compliment that I shall cherish forever.

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  4. Touched :)
    Deep as the oceans ..pure as blue ..those lines you whispered ..the heartache you only knew :)

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